Now I couldn't pinpoint a specific pattern used to create an Ode. I'd find one pattern then I'd find another and I even heard of one poem that used different kinds in each stanza. But there are ten lines in each stanza and the pattern goes in some variation like this: ABABCDECDE. I used ABABCDEDCE. So without further ado:
Suggestion: Wobbly Toast
Type: OdeOde to Wobbly Toast
Oh wobbly toast, so golden brown
I love your flimsy darkened sidesBut how you wobble up and down
Butter’s where your secret hidesWith hard crust and soggy crunches
Four sides of jelly or cinnamonI will take in every flavor
Each of your tastes are par to noneYou’re good for breakfast, dinner, brunches
Each wobbly bite are those I’ll savorWell, what do you think? Let me know. Even give it a try yourself! I'll see you next time.
Aw, this is great! I really like your work with the structured poetry - you have a good ear for not just the rhymes but the right cadence.
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